Are like wash machines. They twist us, spin us, and knock us around...But in the end we come out cleaner, brighter, and better than before
Max Solomon's Video Essay from John Fitzsimmons on Vimeo.
This is extremely heart felt video!! Fitz is definitely one of the best teachers @ Fenn. Sorry about the Phone sound in the background. :(
I love your voice recording in this max, for the most part your pacing and volume were excellent! All I would suggest is that you double the amount of pictures that you have in the slideshow, as they got boring as the only visual stimulation. Well done, especially with all the adversity that you have faced this year this is really excellent!
I really liked how you didn't write about a normal memory like everyone else has Max. I think we can all agree that Fitz is probably one of the best English teachers at Fenn and that his rubrics are a big hand to us all :)
I really feel like someone had to give a tribute to good ol fitz. As an adivor, and a teacher. I love that I can tell you really put the time and cared about this video, because you were writing about something that you cared about. It is funny how it works out that way, as long as you really care, this will turn out great, and it did
This is one... interesting... reflection. However, I love it. While I don't have a similar connection to any particular teacher, the message about trusted mentors is excellent and can apply anywhere. The message about triumph over adversity is also very well delivered. I hated the songwriting assignment, so I'm glad someone got something out of it.
I really like your reflection, Max. It isn't hard to notice that you put ample amounts of time into this, and it really paid off. Great job!
It is hard to comment on anything where I am the central figure. All I can say is thanks. You notice all the little things that I don't think I ever think of, but it is certainly inspiring to know that this year worked for you. You are definitely the hero of your own heroic cycle. I will always remember and cherish this video. Excellent work on this project!